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Farting gives us such great pleasure,

It happens everyday.

If it wasn`t for the good old guff,

We might just pass away.

We all have our favourite type,

Just ask old Mr Heinz.

And when I sometimes let one rip,

They really should introduce a fine.

The wise man as he travels through life enjoys the scenery to either side,since he knows he will not come this way again.The road ahead winds back and forth,over the hills and far away,and who knows where it will lead?

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The following comments are for "windy"
by racepool

Flatulent Expressions
RP- Had trouble with final line, as well. Too much gas -syllables.

Also, something like: "I surely do feel fine," would keep positive flow going..Just a suggestion...

Express on,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 28, 2005 )

Thankyou both for your comments...I agree the last line is a mouthful..

( Posted by: racepool [Member] On: December 29, 2005 )

I think you should start writing about what you would write about after you stopped writing about farts.

You owe it to yourself.

Please do not be offended by my remarks. I may have recently sat down on a Whoopee Cushion.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: December 30, 2005 )

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