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My innerself wants to be free, I just wants to be me. I've tried numerous things, but found none of them were meant to be. I struggle and fight day and night. It's a constant battle between the person inside of me, she's really trying to set herself free. She's been living in hiding since the tender age of 2. She's now confused, bewildered and don't know what to do. The innerself is compassionate, loving, caring and kind. She stays in hiding, because a loving person she can't find. She's invisible to those she love, so much so she can't even get a hug. The innerself is ignored all of the time, sometimes negative emotions cloud her mind. She finds herself wondering why she can't get the love, affection and attention she so desperately needs. She go unnoticed even for her good deeds. She find herself with people, that she don't want to be with; this causes her to withdraw into her shell. She and only she knows this can be a living h.... The innerself wants to be expressive, when she tries, she's met with negative reaction. This causes her to try and hid her feelings and keep her thoughts to herself. She do this, because she feel that no one really cares.

Catherine Oxner

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The following comments are for "MY INNERSELF WANTS TO BE FREE"

Be Free
We have to care before others will. So find yourself and you will never ever regret. Best to you.


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: December 28, 2005 )

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