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In My Dreams...
by Robinbird (Member) - published: December 29, 2005
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Category - Haiku
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He came from no where
The prince of tides to hold, and...
He loves me, for me.

Robin


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by Robinbird

Robinbird
This is beautiful words spoken from the heart of a woman who have a lot of passion.



Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: December 30, 2005 )

Jeannie...
passion, I have, that has waited and waited and waited and still has some patience...waiting for my prince, king, then again Jeannie, I have my King and Prince, don't I? I still have my patience of a beautiful Faith!

Blessings, too...
Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 1, 2006 )

robinbird
I thought for sure I had addressed your comment... Im sorry that I didnt have your name on the =thank u note... I had to run check what your writings were about and found such ease of comfort in the very first one.. so soft and easy this poem.... Just like the LORD's yoke as he said...... and the awesome gift you have to untie the bow,, from God's gift to us makes me feel special just reading your writing..... thank you dearly for sharing your talent here.... coco fr ky

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: January 7, 2006 )

from ky...
coco...how I needed to read that poem again myself...oh, how I want to be free, I'm a lil'
captured at the present, I don't like cold...too many broken bones and scars, that ache...thanks for your timely words, much needed and I'm keepin' the faith, it gives me breath...

blessings to you,
Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 7, 2006 )





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