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Wise I have earned, but...
Miles I have raced, to be me...
It's the stops that hurt.


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The following comments are for "LIFE..."
by Robinbird

i like the truth you state here very much and the way you state it. It's really when we aren't striving, aren't reaching that we do damage to ourselves.

one thought, i can't shake the notion that instead of "but" it should be "and" ? well done.

( Posted by: wrdekle [Member] On: December 30, 2005 )

life is hard!
creative piece
experienced writer,carry on
for the path has a lot of curves with no ease!

all the best

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: December 31, 2005 )

life is so tough, for all of us, we all have our road...Mama always said, "ignorance is bliss",
honestly I knew what it meant when I was 9yrs old... I'd still rather have knowledge than not.
I really can't add anymore, accept Thank ya'll
for liking and reading and always helping me out.

wish you a great 2006...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 1, 2006 )

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