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She will right you and wrong
You

Astound and confuse you

Barrage you with shells

When she gets your range

You will keep your head down

And you won’t see the difference

Till nothings the same.

You’ll love her, you’ll hate
Her

But sooner or later

You will welcome this
Loose cannon to your
Kingdom,

For without her there
Is nothing but boredom;

The artillery of change.



Author's Note: One thing remains the same about things, they change.

------
Charmr


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The following comments are for "Nothing’s The Same"
by Charmr

Hang in there Charmr!
Boredom is the kiss of death Charmr...we women like to keep our men on their toes, trying to guess what we will do next...like a mystery novel you eagerly turn the pages to see what happens next!!

Hang in there...the read is worth it!!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 27, 2005 )

Nothing's the same
and that is the best thing about women, isn't it? Got to love Char, lol. Great read.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: December 28, 2005 )

Changes
Oh Yes Nothing is ever the same, nor will it ever be. Changes can reverse or changes can be permanent, changes of physical and changes internal.

Time is a change each moment that passes.

I live a life of changes, those that change for permanent ways are ones I struggle to accept and let go of for those are the moments of yesterday that keeps you down.

It's the changes of good that I am after each day, and I know they are also after me.

Nice write Romay. Like how each writer can grasp their meanings into what you write and it is really nice when your readers, one or several really get the meanings you write. Some tidbit for everyone.

And here my change so often is a "him".

Dar;)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: December 29, 2005 )

hit me with your best shot


I truly enjoyed this. One's partner can indeed go ballistic. I've been married for twenty years, mostly happy, interrupted by intermittent gunplay. Under the gun is no fun. Thanks.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: January 5, 2006 )

Thanks Everyone
One thing remains the same, Comments Rule!.......Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: January 10, 2006 )





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