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clinging to the grass
fake fingernails breaking
feeling the tug of the moon
I fear I'll fall off earth
to drift alone spinning
getting closer to the front door
just ten feet to go on hands
to the security of the ceiling plaster
just to hang on or over
my last trip again, to Margaritaville


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The following comments are for "Hang on"
by Robinbird

Hang on...
wasted away again in Margaritaville, looking for my lost shaker of salt, some people say that their's a woman to blame, but, I know it's my own damn fault...

Read again, if I can ask you, this one is experience, so true...Just hang on...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: December 27, 2005 )

I like this one and want to share, this is why I don't anymore...whew! I have and don't really know why this came to mind so strong, except the last legal problems...I'm still in a world of crap over the last drink I had on Sept. 12...
It was 1 drink, my sis had many and the legal fees have reached near 5,000 sister, a wreck, my child taken away and my life in havoc...I am in rescue, with many prayers the money has been paid to the best legal counsel in the state of AL., against this crooked system...
I just guess I needed to share a peice of my troubled soul...yet, Robin we be fine, soon...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 1, 2006 )

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