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The World Sleeps



The world sleeps
While the Yangtze
River runs wild

She sleeps with
The enemy ---
She’s blind

Is she in?
Shock and awe
Stop sleeping
So much

The world sleeps; will she ever wake up? Hmmmm!


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"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~






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The following comments are for "The World Sleeps"
by JEANNIE45

Time to awake
Jeannie- Enjoyed read.

Didn't feel: "Hmmmm!" was needed at end. Not sure its reason there.

Peaceful Christmas Wishes,
Bobby







( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 24, 2005 )

Hope
Let us hope she or we do soon.
Well done as always.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: December 25, 2005 )





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