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It's like
A death in the family -
with neither funeral
nor wake...

...but I think
a bereavement would
be easier
to take.

Instead -

We've nowhere to
Lay flowers, and
No focal point
for grieving.

It seems that
something has died
between us - without
physically leaving...



"Only actions matter, for any fool can dream -
and wishes count for nothing in the overall scheme..."

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