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^^^Rainbow of Colors^^^


So many are
Looked down
On by false
People

As their soul
Encompassed
This earth

But all the
Rainbow of
Colors

Shines so
Brilliantly
Like the

Moon that
Glows at the
Evening dawn

And the Sun
That rise and
Sparkles early
In the morning

Like a rainbow
Of Krypton nite
Bulbs all colors
Are glorious

We are all
His children^^^




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"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~






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The following comments are for "Rainbow of Colors"
by JEANNIE45

Colors
Our skins may have a different color but our spirit has none...so by God's standards...we are all the same...as you said...His children...Good one ,Jeannie....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: December 23, 2005 )

True Color...
I was thinking of something to write earliar today, and had considered something about my skin tone (dark) and how hard at times it has been to be different, especially when I was younger, this was before mixed was cool or say accepted...even when I was modeling through the 80's, so many times I was told "you're too dark"
Or your not dark enough, for jobs where they wanted a black lady(you know what I mean)...
color is beautiful, from the fairest to the darkest, and it is what is inside that is the true color and we all bleed and cry....

Good write...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: December 24, 2005 )





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