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You don't get it, do you?
I can't water it down -
Can't dilute what drives me
to write, or I will drown.

It's in me, it IS me -
and has been for so long
that trying to ignore it
makes it twice as strong.

I can't take it away,
nor make it nicer to read,
any more than I could ever,
kill the fucking need.

It's there forever, regardless -
accept, ignore or disagree.
& I can't change it anymore,
than I could
stop
the
tides
at
sea...



11.06.96

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"Only actions matter, for any fool can dream -
and wishes count for nothing in the overall scheme..."


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The following comments are for "By way of an explanation...."
by looptheory

sharp
cutting and clear. nice one.

( Posted by: ark [Member] On: December 20, 2005 )

Explanation of way
Ben- Date and save everything.

Write it real.


Cheers,
Bobby7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 20, 2005 )

explanation
now THAT is a poem

( Posted by: mudSlide [Member] On: December 21, 2005 )

YEAH!
It feels just like that. Thank you looptheory.

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: December 24, 2005 )





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