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***A Clear Circle***



Just a full circle
Sometimes orange,
Gold, or clear image
Just a half of a circle
Floating, rotating
From front to back
From back to front
It stills the night
An isolating image
That Moon ***


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"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~






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by JEANNIE45

Jeannie's Moon
The moon is a reflection of the sun and we are to be a reflection of the Son...I loved this, Jeannie...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: December 20, 2005 )

Lit Moon Alight
Jeannie- Am amazed each time I look up. Appears you are, as well.

Inspiring read,
Bobby

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 20, 2005 )





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