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Shuffle back and step
through all the places I once wept
Now is never here,
you see it's always letting me live this lie
Watching myself die....
again and again and again and I can't stop it,
no way to top it off only to see these words come to life
I'm minding my own destruction,
This money is blood on my hands,
but for all the wrong,
I have to be right

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