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Everything I leave behind is empty, even me
All I know is how to use to make me feel
But now I'm numb again
so i keep on using it up
With only one bridge unburned
I'm 5 hours and 20 days away from myself
and when I get there, smiling eyes will sparkle
and I'll know what that look in your eyes really meant
and all those late nights we spent together in Tokyo will come back and kick me while i'm down
Gotta stop this Feeling, Empty Feeling
Just gotta fill it up with Something, Gotta stop this Needing,
But to reverse the flow of this Blackhole Heart, to turn it back into the Star I should have been,
Would destroy us all

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