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BLoodshot through the Red-Eye dawn
sneaking across a storm-swept lawn
only to be welcomed with open arms, and uragiri
Home is what you call it
Run away only to come back and say "I told you so."
"listen to yourself." ya said
too light to see
too dark to feel
so keep your sneakers on you see,
They say it's always anywhere but here and that's the place you want to be
sucking the soul out of what we got
struggling to rebuild with broken tools
what you see before you is and always was what you never knew wanted you more than you could care
Why do I always write when i'm moving?

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