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time to learn about you
to find out what really is true
then we'll see what's up with ends uneven
when never knows best
spray it on thick
just the way we like it
and it always changes,
when you're on top
feeling empty and used
just like i choose
got to get away from you
pushing and kicking just to hide myself away
keeping me from the world
i'm not ready to be shown
i'll come out when i'm ready
to show you how i really feel
how can I show you what iam?

when i don't know myself....

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