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In this postmodern time
In a bebop town
Jazz meets Blues
And they two meet Ska
Punk kids bouncing
And swinging with
Kids in blue
With blue faces smiling
Kickin’ and dippin’
Black clothes mix with blue faces
Blurring and whirling
Black eyeliner jumps
From white face to blue
A blue face with black clothes
And a white face with jazz hands
Swingin’ and dippin’
Bouncin’ and kickin’
Punk and Jazz and Blues
Swing dancin’ with Ska moves
Unitl everything converges into one
Skank kid with a blue face, black eyeliner
Jazz hands, loose black clothes
A smile and sweaty brow


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