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through
terrors
wind

too heavy
cough
blood
pain

pain
hurts
reek
of uselessness
of guilt
of unworthiness
of stupidity
simple stupidity
idiot things
mistakes
regret
clumsiness?

truth hurts
lies hurt more

sometimes

shadows

lurking questions

too afraid to answer

what could happen

could cut me

could burn


could punish

drown me

could steal

away

things

steal way my truth
or life

the little thatís there
happiness

fades
nothing left

but ashes
and dust

and memories
bad bad

useless
unworthy
fake smiles
forced laughs
unshorn tears
heartbroken

alone
future holds nothing

so take me now
anywhere
but here
hell
heaven


anything
just gone
nonexistence
so won't bother


if its not good enough
just leave
now
NOW
away somewhere


unheard screams
tired of being scared
tired of feeling dead


of everything
of life
and death


of truth
and lies
of love
and hate

of you
and me
decisions

not wanted

choices
not made
just living for the hell of it
until

life passes by
without
knowing
close eyes
and ears
forced not to speak

forced not to hear
forced not to see

forced to smile

forced to hide pain

just tired

forced to hide pain

just tired


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Having everything you ever wanted is nice, Having everything you need dreamed of is better.


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The following comments are for "So So"
by DampheirInBlack

LIFE..
deal with your problems or your problems will deal with you.

sounds like you have many losses, in love respect and the enjoyment of LIFE.
read my poem,"In Between".
phases, stages and levels. is what happens in this here arena. pull your self together!!!
You can get pass this, If I can so can you.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: December 15, 2005 )





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