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Youíve lost your appeal and im not
In love with the way you smile anymore
Lost all the recklessness
Of a boy in love
So
Step back and sigh
Kiss the gutter
Kiss the curb
Break your heart all over mines
Just to make me smile
So
Donít hold back
All the words that were never edged out
In stone
Or
Paper
Donít hold back
On what you would say to me
If I wasnít
The way you tried to make me
I could count all the flaws
Hear all the whispers (some shit)
Pushed under the love sheets
And
Caught in the tangles of you
Make it what you want it
Iíll be gone tomorrow
So
Iíll be gone tomorrow
So
Say what you would
Iím begging you
Iím begging you
You wouldnít let me down would you?




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Having everything you ever wanted is nice, Having everything you need dreamed of is better.


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The following comments are for "Kill Kill"
by DampheirInBlack

southbound love
I really like the line "caught in the tangles of you"
You write with youthful angst. Love sucks, but the upside makes it all worthwhile!

blessings-
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: December 12, 2005 )





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