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Such Is Life
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bouquets of a sinful fragrances
come as does my hay fever
but I canít wait for them
steps away are the dreams
Iíve been chasing
so far,
so close
Ėpasses by
Iím not racing
yet
my
strides
are smaller than
yesterdays
but I havenít tired
victory
hasnít been given
nor has it been taken
and friendsÖÖ
people tend to over-rate them
go with your heart
and try
to come closer
to what mostly sets you apart
stick to your guns
and your dreams
youíll never be far away from
if youíre wrong
you canít be right
such is lifeÖ
something to live by

lamemansterms

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If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!
~L.T


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by LamemansTerms

windchime
thx so much for the kind words on my philosophical.....ahhh I can't even spell it---my poem Thanks again
lamemansterms

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: December 11, 2005 )





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