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Verse one:
See how pretty
Your eyes look
When you are crying....crying
And the glittering of
The glittering of
Your smile
When you are dying
The slow and tormented death of
Love

I can see...I can see
Everything you never
Wanted me
I can breathe...I can breathe
All the toxins in from your
Intensity

Chorus:
So tell me tell me
So tell me
What were you trying to hide
That night?
So tell me tell me
So tell me
What were you trying to
That night?

Verse two:
See how you shine
When you are at your worst
Your fabricate illusions
When you are falling
You are falling
Inside yourself
To lie in the wake of
Death

I can see...I can see
Everything you never
Wanted to be
I can breathe...I can breathe
All the toxins in from your
Insanity


Chorus:
So tell me tell me
So tell me
What were you trying to hide
That night?
So tell me tell me
So tell me
What were you trying to hide
That night?

Hook:
Discover the voices
Scattered around you
You looking like some trash queen
Me playing the part of jester
But itís nothing like it was before
Before we made the jump from
Girl to Monster
And now itís all done
And now itís all done

Iíve found you out


Chorus: 2X
So tell me tell me
So tell me
What were you trying to hide
That night?
So tell me tell me
So tell me
What were you trying to hide
That night?


See your eyes
Masked in fear
And now Iíve come
To take
To take it all away...
To take it all away....
And let this be
Your dying day


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Having everything you ever wanted is nice, Having everything you need dreamed of is better.


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The following comments are for "Unselective"
by DampheirInBlack

Girl to Monster
Would love to hear this to music.

( Posted by: Nepsis [Member] On: December 12, 2005 )

Thanks
I wish I had music to this but I gave up playing guitar a while ago. All I have is a tune inside my head though. Thanks for the comment by the way.

( Posted by: DampheirInBlack [Member] On: December 12, 2005 )





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