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If dreams were wishes,
And wishes came true,
I'd gladly give them all to you.

If stars were diamonds,
I'd climb the stairway to heaven,
And gladly give them all to you.

If I could swim the deepest ocean,
And find a treaure,
That treasure would be you.

If I could speak words of love,
To take away all your hurts andpain,
I'd gladly give them all to you.

If dreams were wishes,
And wishes came true,
I'd gladly give them all to you

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have faith in ones self for all things...poet7376(brian)


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by poet7376

gud!
Heyya.U luv sumone too much.
I would dedicate such a poem to my lovely husband.I like it.

( Posted by: SVDEOL [Member] On: December 5, 2005 )





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