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Janice was precocious and

A lovely girl at the age of

When she was found by
A jealous wife

In the arms of her husband
Who thought she was nineteen

And as her husband took flight

She proceeded to slice Janice
Up with her knife

Janice was left bleeding
In the ditch

With a dozen cuts to her torso

As she left, she told Janice
Let this be a lesson to you, bitch

I could have just as easily
Cut your face, you know

Next time I wonít be as

Iíll send you to hell and
Not even think twice

Janice pressed charges on
The wife and as her trial
Got under way

Janice felt that she needed
To do more so she visited her
Attacker to say

Enjoy your stay if you can
I hear prison is easier for
A woman than a man

I will see to it your
Husbandís plate is full

While you are away
Getting gored by the bull.

This story is true as told
To me

And I canít help wondering
When this woman is free

If this insanity will
Finally come to an end

Or will revenge be given
More precious time to misspend.


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The following comments are for "Revenge, The Triangle, Lust, And Ordeal"
by Charmr

Estrogen fest
This is entertaining as always from you, but such a sad story.

"show me a human being, and I can tell you a sad story..."

I always enjoy your writes

best to you and char-

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: December 3, 2005 )

Sad Tale
But you know...Janice would be proud. I am too.


( Posted by: Char [Member] On: December 17, 2005 )

Elizabeth,Lucie, and Charlene
Three fine poets, three fine comments. Three x's Hell Mary, I'm flattered. Thank-you ladies.........Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: January 10, 2006 )

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