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In the cozy dark womb I laid
Did the can can and played
The gushing sounds of the amniotic fluid
The warmth inside was so splendid!

The sudden evacuation was really forceful
To leave that heavenly abode was so painful
I plunged into a strange new world
Where everything seemed so cold!

I was turned upside down
Washed and weighed even if I did frown
I cried in agony
Searched for my good old company!

Oh! That was God’s grace
I was comforted by her warm embrace
Lying close to her chest
Finally, I found a place to rest!

Feeling her rhythmic heartbeat
I enjoyed the milky treat
Her reassurance was such that nothing further made me bother
I felt as cozy as ever ‘coz that was my mother!

Sireesha V Deol


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The following comments are for "REASSURANCE"

Need guidance
Dear friends,
Please come up with your valuable suggestions on how to write short stories for children aged 9 to 12.I have got good content.Need guidance on how short they needa be, how simple the language and post me some if you have written any!that will be too good.Thanks.

( Posted by: SVDEOL [Member] On: December 2, 2005 )

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