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Living, thinking
round and round
I'm running in circles
it's dragging me down
I fight every step
but it just doesn't work
i left what I love
My family, my hope
Now I'm drowning
in this sea of despair
but my family knows
I'll always be there
maybe not in body
but in spirit and soul
I touch their lives
and then I go
because i can't bear
to see dreams die
I love making them happy
my natural high
but i know that this
cannot go on
Peopel move forward
grow up and regret
the people they loved
and then they forget
the happy times
freedom and friends
just doing whats right
Does this cycle
ever end?
or am I doomed to loneliness
a life without friends
Will we both forget
all the good times?
We'll wait and see
If we forget
these memories

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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The following comments are for "Memories"
by twistymisty

never forget
don't think we would ever forget the good times or the bad. none of us would be where we are right now without eachother. know that your loved and missed ~ ronnie, shane, eric, scooba, shameus and all the rest

( Posted by: dentt [Member] On: November 29, 2005 )

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