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Atlantis they say is ingenutiy at its best
With no hardcore proof it even exists
Stories are told to explain its attraction
But what if it's true is the common reaction
A theory if I may on our new found friends
A planet if you will distant but visited
This planet called Earth, but this earth yet to be touched
The soil was blossomed and the circle was nudged
A perfect colony with the knowledge of eons
And no outside disrtactions, just a center of harmony
It grew and it grew, and it grew to be lonesome
And up from the ground sprung the species of man
Though not from our world some knowledge we gave
We'll start with a little and see what takes place
The circle grew bigger, the center was charged
A plan was in works that was seen in the stars
So far, so good, things were going great
Here's the part you were waiting for, the oh! just wait
The center was charged, the circle grew big
But the negative vibes had started to dig
Results that we feared were now taking place
Man taking peace and purging to hate
A gift that we gave, a sign for mans eye
Four sides of stone that point to the sky
The path that you lead will bring your demise
In hate there is death, In peace there is light
Light is explored, death is desolate
Wonder and amazement caught man by surprise
When the soul of the universe was shown to his eye
The negative vibes had started to fade
But quickly returned in wave after wave
The circle grew bigger, the center grew dark
And blood stained the plains
Our gift it would seem
For it's truth was not seen
Now more than before the darkness approaches
Creeps to the door and shows no emotions
With sorrow at heart sign two we devise
A circle of stones that look down from the sky
Wonder and amazement consumed once again
But off in the distance the darkness remains
Eyes watching you was not the message heard
The hatred continued and darkness returned
Man versus man, day after day
The light in the circle was now shining gray
A forseen conclusion in front of our face
With sorrow at hearts, our home we vacate
In search of a world untouched like your earth
With the knowledge we gained, again we'll give birth
No we're not giving up as you think you will see
We'll keep a watchful eye and devise sign three
Atlantis explained, I've boggled your mind
But the question remains....Who am I?


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