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Donít Live Just For Heart Beat
Poem

Donít feel that youíre living,
Just because youíre
Breathing and having
A heart beat.
Live in such a way that,
Your every heart
beat counts.
Do worthy things that
Stand up to say,
That youíre not
Just breathing
Or having heart beat,
But you are alive.

By GSVK


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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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The following comments are for "Donít Live Just For Heart Beat"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

Live
GSV; Loved this!

Love people and
use things
Not love things
and use people


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: November 29, 2005 )

live/heartbeat.
simple, and my first, I'm trying, I don't know how to slow down, did you know today was the 1st day of the rest of my life? Interesting. live those heart beats. good thought.
a101

( Posted by: austin101 [Member] On: November 30, 2005 )

not just breathing
one of my greatest fears is to wake up one day and realize that i have been dead a long time ago , you are so right being alive is "not just breathing".
May you always be alive!!
abi

( Posted by: abi [Member] On: December 4, 2005 )

Thanks...
...Windchime,Jeannie,Pen,Austin and Abi for ur nice comments.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: December 4, 2005 )





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