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is it heaven ?
when you fear and travel?
when you dare not to listen?
when it's considered heaven but not heaven?

delicious pasta


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by tinylulu

a question
Hi lulu , so glad to c u here joining was a surprise for me.. first i guess u should put ur piece under poetry category, mmnever mind maybe next time..

back to ur piece, so little so surreal...when i just read it I felt I am flying..I dont know why I had ths feeling..but it s graet,,,thats why i kept reading it over and over

waiting for the next coming surprises...
all the best ,Hiba

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: November 25, 2005 )

i agree with heba , it's quite surreal , what i liked about it though is the juxtaposition of words , fear.. travel , heaven ....not heaven.
would love to read more..

( Posted by: abi [Member] On: December 4, 2005 )

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