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Piercings and tattoos make the wrong impression,
Why should these matter for a job searching session,
Body art is so misunderstood and oppressed,
But itís the way we live, and should be expressed,
Our skin is our canvas to write our story of life,
Like operations scars from a surgeonís knife.



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The following comments are for "Human Canvas"
by Colwyn

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Colwyn,

This poem I found very interesting. This view of the human body as a canvas is amazing. The only problem I have with it is I think it would be wonderful if you used what you have here and add to it, creating a larger poem. What you already have is great, I just would have liked to see more of the same (is that selfish).

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: August 27, 2002 )





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