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I see it in your eyes
You look at me with
Such disappointment
How can something
So little
Make such a big deal?

The glass shattered
So did your trust
My emotions
On display for the world to see
But you didn't seem to care

Tears of blood
Tears of pain
Can't you see
The tears I cried today?
I screamed inside
I cried outside
You didn't even notice
Maybe you'll see this...

Broken confidence
Shattered Emotions
Mentally & phisically
For once I made the mistake
Was put on display

I could be beaten
Broken & bloody
Maybe dead
Would you care?
Do you even notice
The emotional array infront of you?

Chrous x2

Maybe if I was
A prep, a honor student
Maybe a jock
Would you notice then?
Or would you just press me harder?
It seems likely

Can't you love me for me?
I have a huge heart & imagination
I'm only human, I make mistakes too
So what if I don't act like the other kids
Or that my friends all drink or do drugs
At least they care about me & my writing

Notice me please
Everyone else already has

Tke one look into my eyes
You might see a little of yourself
Looking back
Or is that what scares you?
Take me as I am
Or it could take my life

I won't be what you want me to
I don't care if it pisses you off
That's not who I am
Stop living through me!
I'm my own person
I am unique

Gimme something to believe in... yea yea

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