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She wants to forget, but she'll always remember.
She would have done anything to be loved by you.
Yet all you showed her was hate and scorn.
Why could you not see her?

She's only one of the guys,
She'll never be pretty in your eyes.
She wishes she had the guts;
to burst out and say "here's what you're missing bud."
But she's afraid of change in the back of her mind,
she will try to change;
hopefully with time.

She'll be gone--long gone--
by the time you realize, exactly what you had.
It was always in front of your eyes,
But you were just blind.

Why can't you hold her she wonders?
Can she change to please you, she cries?
She'd do anything you asked her,
but you just pass her by.

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