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Anguish and agony
Shedding life’s pretenses.
simplify

Facing only the one
Center of being
center of self

Life
Love
Happiness


Take the Challenge, leave a comment. Like or dislike makes no mater which.Take the dare and say something about this work. You will feel better and I can improve my work.

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Ano'wara


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The following comments are for "Facing only the one"
by Anowara

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I liked this poem, was short but said a lot in a little. Im not completely positive if I got the message you were intending to convey, but nonetheless I did get a message.

Facing only the one
Center of being
center of self

I felt this line helped you pull off the end, it seemed like it was almost a riddle, and the last stanza answered it, Im probably way off, just the way I saw it

Great poem overall, looking forward to more. Return the favor if you can.

( Posted by: Essence [Member] On: November 20, 2005 )

Yes there is a meaning
Hi Essance and wind chimes.
Yes there is a meaning. I got you to thinking which was what I wanted to do. Essance you recieved the message you where suppose to from this poem.
Before I attempt to explain what meanings I was trying to convey. Let see what reactions we get from others.
Thank you for both of your comments.
I will say sometimes poetry that is short and sweet has more effect then a sonnet of 40 verse.
Ano'Wara

( Posted by: Anowara [Member] On: November 20, 2005 )





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