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Yeah i felt pissed when i wrote this, this story is based on another one i heard, but i changed alot from it. soo. I own half of this work! please read and review tis sad:(

“Hey there, I wanted to show…” she was cut off by grunt.

“Damn im so pissed,” he said looking to the ground.

“Why what’s wrong?” she asked worried.

“Eh just everything,” he said looking at her.

“Explain,” the girl replied holding his hand.

“I just lost a championship game, parents flipped out on me for no reason, and im catching a cold.” He said.

“Well hey there will always be other games, you know I’ll take care of you when your sick, and what did your parents flip out about?” She smiled at him and waited.

“They are making me pay them for the car repair,” he said frustrated.

“Is it a lot of money?” she asked hopeful.

“Hey I don’t feel well im gonna go lay down,”

“Bye” he added as he began to walk away.

“Yeah sure bye,” she said waving to him.

Two hours later a friend of hers asked to go on a quick drive to the store. Of course she answers with a sweet yes. As they were driving a truck missed a signal light. Her friend swerved to avoid the truck, and hit a tree instead. Her friend was killed on spot and she’s in critical condition.

“Daniel?” a girl cried on the phone.

“What?” he asked wondering what had happened?

“What’s wrong?” he added.

“ My sister…your girlfriend she was involved in a major car wreck” she said over her tears.

“Is she okay?” he asked concerned.

“She’s in critical condition,” the sister replied crying louder.

“I’ll be there in ten minutes.”

He showed up to the hospital room, standing outside the door going over the last conversation he had; had with her, covering up the faint beeping sound of the machine.

“She wanted to give me something or tell me something?” he said as he walked in.

“Yes this,” her mom replied, exiting the room knowing he would want to have alone time with her.

It was an envelope, smelling of his and hers favorite perfume. On the back she had it sealed it with a dark red kiss. As he opened it, it read,


You’re the love of my life, and I wouldn’t want any other thing. You’re everything to me, without you im nothing but a worthless girl. I love you with everything I am and everything I have. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. I love you and that will never change.

Sealed with it was a ticket stub to the first movie they went to together, and the first picture they had taken together. He had kissed her cheek right when the camera flashed.

He kissed the picture as tears rushed down his face on the photo. It looked as if she was crying in it, then suddenly the machine beeped one last time, and flat lined…three minutes later she was pronounced dead.

If only...I could last til winter

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