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Never knowing why thereís pain,
Cause your not here to tell me,
I clang on you like a parasite that was never learning
I never understood the basic rules, which are still so vague.
Why was I a fool who just letting you carry me through life?
Now youíre gone Iíve lost it all and have no source of learning



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The following comments are for "Never Learning"
by Colwyn

Sad but nice.
Colwyn,

I really liked this piece. I also found it very sad. Being so dependent on someone else that you cannot even tell if you are in pain is something that I would find quite frightening if it was happening to me. Anyways, good work.

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: August 27, 2002 )

Wow!
It's a shame that obviously painful circumstances are behind this, but this is a truly beautiful poem. the rythm is very comlex and jagged, and the rhymes and alliterations powerfully artistic. Maybe this one just agrees with my own style more, but I really love it! Again, thank you for having the courage to post, and keep it up.

( Posted by: The Recycled Avatar [Member] On: September 6, 2002 )





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