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So many things
go wrong in a life
then there's one thing
that makes it all right
but I'm too blind see
So I pushed it away
I ripped out my heart
Now I'm all alone
back to the start
full of pain
just like before
I'll never be okay
this pain inside
will never go away
I want you to know
I'll love you forever
but I can't show you that
cause I can't really feel
and I can't love anyone
until I know what's real
I don't know myself
so how can you?
This pain I've caused
will never be through
I love you ya know
I'm so sorry to
but I'll spend all my life
thinking of you
I'm sorry Shane

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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The following comments are for "So Sorry"
by twistymisty

I liked this piece a lot. It's sad, but not in the "oh, that was depressing" kind of way, the kind of sad that presses at your heart... I felt this piece inside of me... not very many pieces are good enough to do that. Great Job

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: November 19, 2005 )

I really like this one too becasue it's just me saying how I feel and thats really hard yha kno what I mean? Newayz thanks for your input Peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: December 16, 2005 )

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