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Woke up this morning

Still fucked from the night before

Eyes sealed shut  salted    soudless

Heated voices come back to mind

Flowing drinks   amber kisses   want

Take a breath (cough and sputter)

Now I'm walking these streets

Not really going nowhere

But searching for something

With my half used cigarette

To keep my company

Having everything you ever wanted is nice, Having everything you need dreamed of is better.

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