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Please, someone fix me
I've been broken beyond repair
From things
and places
I see everything covered in blood
And it is mine
But I try to shut my eyes out
From the world I know
And soon
I'll have to face
To be
But I sit for a while and pretend it's not me
It's someone else
That I've been sent to help
That way I can act as if I'm ok
I'm ok
I'm ok
Stain, stain, stain
It goes again
The thing
That helps me think
When I cannot
The thing that fills my soul
With memories
That never were
Eat out my heart
Replace it with steel and coal
At least then I'll feel something other
Than pain and guilt
Cut, cut, cut
Its better than you think
Its better than living
It's better than dying

Having everything you ever wanted is nice, Having everything you need dreamed of is better.

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