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You have a hold on me.
Never have told you.
It hurts?
This hurt -
I am not whole.

You don't know.
No one knows.
Don't know nothing.

I want you to let go.
But i don't want you to go.
No, i should let go.
And let you go.

I'll show nothing.
So you don't know.
Dont know nothing.

Not even this hole.
That has made me so unwhole.
You will know nothing.
I will let you go.

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by namelessdragoon

Wow man i really love this it is awesome I hope you keep it up I love the way you direct you thoughts. peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: January 2, 2006 )

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