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I watched from a sealed room
As she throws her life away
Poisons her blood with itchy while powder
Cuts into her flesh with lovliness
Or what she thinks is
An escape
Or release
Watch as they take and take her
And she lies stone cold
As if dreaming
I watch all the flames and dust
Curl around her body
In a red and blue haze
Making it easier for her to breathe
Making it harder for her to live
Watch as she does the deeds
Because she can't survive on what they give her
It's not it
It's not it
She says
Watch her stumble along the sidewalk
Tearing herself to shreds
And I watch
As she slowly
Fades into herself
From my sealed room
I watch myself fall...

Having everything you ever wanted is nice, Having everything you need dreamed of is better.

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