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I speak to you in silence,
Long after you have gone.
Wanting so bad to be held,
I think of you.
Am I asking for too much,
Or am I patiently awkward in retrospect.
I need so bad to be held,
That I carry no feelings
Of hate or desire.
I can no longer feel
This fatigue that has
So carefully taken over me.
Ill leave all my memories behind,
If youd just hold me for a while.
Keep me safe,
Locked in your arms.

"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding" Khalil Gibran, The Prophet

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The following comments are for "To You..."
by Serendipity

Nice Poem
Nicely written, I enjoyed the read.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: November 16, 2005 )

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