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yesterday I came across
a soft patch of fresh green meadow
for a while I lay there in the grass
happily communing with the clouds
but soon I realized
I was feeling very hungry...

"bye bye little cloud
figure buddies"
I said.


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"If you can't annoy somebody, there is little point in writing."

Kingsley Amis




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The following comments are for "Realization Of Emptiness"
by MohammadJesusBernstein

Deep
I can see why you're a guru!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: November 13, 2005 )

bye bye cloud
just u turned it the other way around as if nature also enjoys our company and it must feel sorrow when we leave....i find it surreal
and i enjoyed reading this piece....it brings sense of freshness and joy...


thanks guru



HIBa

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: November 14, 2005 )

Emptiness
I am humbled by your affectionate offerings and appreciation.
Love, Guru-B.

( Posted by: MohammadJesusBernstein [Member] On: March 11, 2009 )





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