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With the smell of
cinnamon and ginger
on my hands
I expectantly watch
through the oven door
the dough rising,
knowing that itíll become
crispy and sweet
covered in chocolate
decorated with chopped nuts
the most delicious

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The following comments are for "Cookies"
by PamHKyle

Sounds delicious, Pam; you get a very appealing image across to this hungry browser! I just find it more prosaic than poetic, though.

( Posted by: Alondra [Member] On: November 14, 2005 )

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