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Disappear

Hes bigger, Hes stronger
he has taken my medals.

Hes charming, Hes funnier
He has taken my audience.

Hes intellegent, Hes smarter
He has taken my success.

Hes popular, Hes good looking
He has taken my friends.

Hes agressive, hes impressive
He has taken my name.

Hes understanding, Hes caring
He has even taken my breath away.

Disappear,
Give me back.
Give me back.

My life.
he has taken my life.
Give me back my life.
Disappear

Then, you will truely
be
understanding.

Disappear


I am
Disap
pear
ing


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The following comments are for "Disappear"
by namelessdragoon

Intense
This was a very powerful poem. Raw emotion and a great feeling of sadness for the dissapearing person. Great job

( Posted by: Essence [Member] On: November 13, 2005 )





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