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is the sexiest woman
at the slaughterhouse...
with her breasts like two
perfectly written poems
beneth her blood-stained
frock, and her long, wild,
chestnut colored hair secured
and sanitary as a nun's.

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The following comments are for "Amanda"
by johnjohndoe

One darn good poem!
Hell ya! This is the best thing I've laid my sore reading eyes upon in a long time. This is good man-reading poetry.

( Posted by: BubbaJackson [Member] On: November 13, 2005 )

"her breasts like two perfectly written poems"

I admire your direct writing style and simple use of language.

( Posted by: Ashmedai [Member] On: August 2, 2006 )

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