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ALRIGHT here we go. Now i wont be putting up my novels chapters up here any more. not the dawns end! its my new one which starts if off, its really cool so far. so pleae go here www.saleinaenachiya.piczo.com thats my webpage for my book, Please read it; it would really really mean alot to me, and i need to know what to work on and what not to work on THANKS

btw heres the discribtion to the book:



Kiria has lived in a world where everything has been set to die. Her city she lives in is one of the few that actually hasn't changed over time. Poverty and disease roam about beyond their cities barricade.
Soon after Kiria's sixteenth birthday she receives a message from a mysterious white light. That light shows her another world, another pathway she must follow. With that she is given a Blue moon necklace. The necklace alone will follow the phases on the moon, giving her protection, and ideal strength. But with everything that is good there comes a price. On the three nights of the full moon the necklace is tinted, darkness surfaces and things could get out of control. Not only that, but Kiria must find away to change her not so wonderful life. And keep her necklace away from a strange order that seems to be hunting her down.



THANKS ONCE AGAIN I HOPE YOU READ IT! I WOULD LOVE IT IF YOU DID!!!!!!!!!!!!

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If only...I could last til winter


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