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Have you ever felt the time slipping by........
Have you ever felt like a lonely star in the sky;
Have you ever felt so helpless as you cry......
Have you ever ?

Have you ever felt relations distancing,
And the ego, the pride slowly enhancing......
Have you ever felt 'them' drastically changing
Have you ever ?

Have you ever felt loved ones leaving you alone,
Breaking your heart like a thousand bones.......
Have your ever felt their need for love outgrown,
Have you ever ?

Have you ever felt the time slipping by..........
Have you ever felt like a lonely star in the sky;
Have you ever felt so helpless as you cry........
Have you ever ?


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The following comments are for "HAVE YOU EVER ?"
by anjani

I have
i have ever felt that.....and reading this piece makes me feel im not alone...it gives me a lift!!!!because it is not only me who have these feelings

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: November 11, 2005 )





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