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Chorus

Have you ever dipped your toe in heaven?
Have you ever found it again?

Verse 1

Do you know what it feels like
To cry all alone
Do you know what it feels like
To leave what feels like home

Pre-Chorus

And you know that, you know that,
I'm waiting (repeat)

( Chorus )

Verse 2

Do you know what it feels like
To find someone who's found you too?
Who's just like you, who sees you true
A dove from darkness.

Pre-Chorus

And you know that, you know that,
I'm waiting
For the day that, the day that,
I'm smiling
Again

( Chorus )

End

You don't know,
You don't know,
You don't know,
You don't know how easy you made it


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Comments

The following comments are for "I'm Smiling"
by tekp

Im smiling
I loved this piece, it was simple but it held a lot in it. Thanks a lot

( Posted by: namelessdragoon [Member] On: November 11, 2005 )

:)
Thanks :)

( Posted by: t [Member] On: November 13, 2005 )





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