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Verse 1

Now I'm trying to say this,
Trying to get it right the first time round.
It's the first time that I'll say this,
And I don't really know how it should sound.

Searching for the right words to say,
I'm searching for the time and place.
And I pray to God, that I'll sing this song.
And that it doesn't come out all wrong.


So please take these words,
And put them in your hand.
Before the night is over,
I hope you'll understand.

So please take these words,
And put them in your hand.
Before the night is over,
I hope you'll understand.

Verse 2

Losing sleep over this,
I'm so tired.
Just need to do it, just need to say it.
I just need to get it out, get it out.

But the words don't seem to be coming,
But I don't want to give up now.
The words weren't all I was hoping,
But maybe they might work somehow.


So you're sitting there
And I'm wondering,
Wondering what it is that you're expression tells

Me, and you're sitting there,
And I'm hoping,
Hoping that your not somebody else.

Been all around this town and
Seen all you people frown
Putting these views in my head, but they're.

Lies, blurring my vision
But I've made my decision
I'm not gonna hide.

And you're watching me
And I'm gazin' back,
Wondering where I'll go if not this

Place. And you close your eyes,
And I'm hoping,
Hoping that you can still see my

Face. Then you let me know
Then you let it show that
You see nothing different in my

Eyes. And now I know, that you know me,
Flying free
I don't have to lie.

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