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Romantic Short Love Stories is seeking love poems, romantic short stories, true love stories, love letters, "how we met" stories, romantic date stories, and wedding proposal stories. True stories can be anything from romantic, embarrassing, to just plain funny. All types welcomed. $3/per poem, $25/short story and a one year subscription. Pay for all other contributions is a free one year subscription to all the romance you can read. Submit up to 5 poems, 1 short story, or 1 true story be email to: romance@romantic-short-love-stories.com or submit through our website: http://www.romantic-short-love-stories.com/make-romance-happen.html




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The following comments are for "Call For Romance Submissions"
by ttnorris

Overdone
I would've paid attention if this had shown up on ONE thread... as it is, it's just a little obnoxoius-
just my opinion-
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( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

All the other s##t that this adressed..
I guess my thought was heard by the powers that be, cause now I just look stupid. All the other threads ARE gone, except this lone comment.
Anyway to get rid of this Peter?
Please.....
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( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

romance
Never mind, I'll submit something.... that'll show them... lol
-E

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

romance
Sonnet to Crow


He was a god; a demigod was he.
His shape, earth-bound to me, was but a crow.
There was a part of him that did love me,
and I appeared to him a lovely doe.
Now crow needs crow, god, god, and buck for doe-
and so I watched him choose his final frame.
Pierced, then, I died. My life spun out to woe.
In all these turns of sun I've lived this shame.
Not god, nor buck, but crow -he chose his form;
to peck and scrape instead of leap with me.
He chose to leave me lost, contrite, forlorn.
His fear betrayed him to conformity.
Now I, forever-after, ache for him.
He, trammeled in his field, now old and grim.

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

romance
Sorry friends, don't know what glitch happened-
best to you all-
could be worse than romance, right?
-best to you,
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( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

Tap, Lillia, any one else-
Tap I love you- I love everyone, but I'm drinking. Kidding-
Chill, my friends. Please. Write-

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

Support for EMAKS
aaahhh, a lost love. I know the feeling.

in keeping with theme of lost love, and despair, here's a little something I hacked out last night (it's a first draft, so bear with me):

(I'm also going to post it as a poem)

**********
SERIOUSLY


Seriously -

Can you EVER take me

seriously

now that you know me so well?

Now that the vail is cast aside
and there's no more mystery to me

Am I what you hoped I'd be

or is all too much
to take me

Seriously?

I'm too tall to be short
too short to be truly tall

I stand alone
stuck in the middle

not as smart as you maybe
but still smarter than most

smart enough to know that you
could do better

Seriously

Robert Andrew Jackson 2006

( Posted by: rajengineer [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

Pen, raj, romance?
I SWEAR there where atleast THREE posts that were all the same and were some sort of sales venue for brands of at least 50 television sets. I swear. (I don't do drugs anymore!)
I responded to that initially, and then somehow it became this "call for romance submissions"-
I played along, why not? (It was 2 a.m. afterall- ;) )
Thanks raj and pen for acknowledging-
now I must go back to my rubber room

hope ya'll have a bliss filled day!
E

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )





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