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what can i say
you're always in my way
never listening to what i have to
beg you to stop throwing
my feelings out the door
every minet you're away from me
is more then just plane agony
whe you tell me that i'm
so used to the abuse
it's true
the bruses will heal
but not on the inside
where it hurts to be called
my minds always in a
state of questioning
what is happening to yo
to me
you are a monster
always on my back about
i wish i were dead
now and then i'm affraid to be
without you and
with you im in pain
what can i say
i can't fight it anyway
you're a monster
i'm apart of you
you're apart of me
will i ever
be free?


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