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come in the rain
and tutch my skin
come in the rain
and slide your hands over my face
come in to the rain
with me
it's colder more then ever
the rain
and now we have each other
it's clear
but who am i to stop the rain
which trickels down the back of so many
come in the rain
and wash your tears away
come in the rain
and all will be forgiven
come in to the rain
and be with me forever.

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T.A.O


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